Monday 6 October 2014

Romeo and Juliet Research Project




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  1. Mr. Kolton6 October 2014 at 11:50

    test 3

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    1. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:07

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:34

      Had good quotes that you good back up, and used good language

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:11

      Watch your capitalization but very well done

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  2. Lukas6 October 2014 at 14:43

    Lukas Project

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:30

      short maybe sweet but not in this case! need more quotes thoe

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:30

      good amount of detail but could use more quotes

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:51

      Good detail but more quotes would have been better

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:52

      very good! kinda short tho

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    5. raija14 October 2014 at 12:03

      I like that you used a different source other than powerpoint. more quotes could have been good but, i liked your detail

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  4. Unknown9 October 2014 at 17:43

    Sarah Farrington
    https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1MOynhEqdTSDQ-UHT-xXtlBzhyfHJKYMysPXf4qghI6I/edit?usp=docslist_api

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:32

      love how organized it is but you missed a personal analysis on one slide.

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:36

      I really enjoy how you added in an easier version of the quote so we understand better what the quote means, and plus we understand better what you're trying to get across. You did miss a personal analysis.

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    3. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:39

      Nice layout and it is organised

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:56

      very good! I like your use of quotes and easier versions of them!

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    5. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:15

      nice translation and explanation again u missed one though

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  5. Unknown10 October 2014 at 19:16

    Colin Johnson

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    1. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:35

      there were a lot of quotes but a few were unrelated to the topic GOOD JOB!

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:37

      nice tho more liveliness in it would made it more interesting to read

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:05

      Explanations are fantastic, question was well answered but ideas need to organized and visuals could be improved.

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    4. raija14 October 2014 at 12:07

      could have been a bit more interesting to read but it was well written and you had a variety of good quotes

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  6. raija13 October 2014 at 08:42

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:43

      very appealing visually need to capitalize on some titles though

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

      CAPITILIZATION good ideas and nice quotes

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  7. Unknown13 October 2014 at 13:45

    keslea couglin
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YaZKn4uP7fPkNiPDs5a7yhtxoRrLrwy6dqynB2Vr9ko/pub

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:36

      Very organized. Consider more personal input per quote, rather than one or two sentences each

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:37

      You have good quotes but need to explain them in more detail.

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:40

      Very detailed but layout needs to be more attractive

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:03

      Good quotes and you backed them up really well

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  10. Unknown14 October 2014 at 06:22

    Kalila Attiyat

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:36

      Good but needs more pictures

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:46

      Good quotes! you didn't really have your own opinion on the subject which would have been

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:48

      You explained well, and you had good quotes

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:12

      Good quotes and explanations

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  11. Unknown14 October 2014 at 10:58

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    1. raija14 October 2014 at 11:30

      you had very good quotes and your explinations were detailed

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:32

      Good quotes and thoughts, but needs consistency in layout

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:44

      Well thought out with convincing evidence.

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:44

      Great responses highly detailed and well though out but you could have spent more time on creating a visually appealing template.

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    5. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:47

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    6. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:47

      good quotes and thoughts! good job

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    7. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

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    8. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

      could use a bit more quotes but good expantations

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    9. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

      I really liked your opinions toward every quote, they were straight forward and thought out. Although, the layout was a bit confusing, sometimes you'll add the quote into your paragraph and sometimes you won't. Other than that, I really enjoyed your slideshow.

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  13. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:03

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    1. Mr. Kolton14 October 2014 at 11:27

      Very thorough!

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:27

      Nice use of pics but too much writing on expert slide nice thoe

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:34

      Excellent layout, don't forget quotation marks

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    5. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

      very attractive layout, I like how thorough you were

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    6. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:05

      QUOTATIONS RISTO! But besides that very well done

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    7. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:10

      Your quotes are very good, and your opinion are well done, but I personally didn't like how your quotes and your opinion are that close together, and you forgot quotation marks so it can get confusing where your quote is.

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  14. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:27

    Kim Davies
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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:39

      Great analyses, don't forget to watch punctuation.

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:40

      I like how you made your analysis of every quote straight forward so you can get your point across. Although, you didn't add in an expert analysis, but other than that I really did enjoy the powerpoint.

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:44

      Good explanations but some of them where really similar.

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    4. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:47

      nice background ,good quotes

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    5. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:49

      2 stars is that you had a great explanation of your quotes and also you stuck with your opinion throughtout the powerpoint
      1 wish is that the colour texture of the powerpoint is not very pleasing to the eye

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    6. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:59

      Excellent points about their immaturity and like analysis after every quote.

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    7. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:11

      theme pictures good quotes nice layout expect no expert analysis

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  15. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:29

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:37

      good use of quotes and explanations, needs a stronger title

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:41

      You had good quotes that you good back up, and you explained yourself well.

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:44

      You have very good explanations of what the quote means but you spent too much of your paragraph about what is happening in the quote and not much of what your personal opinion is toward it. Generally, I liked your slides.

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    4. raija14 October 2014 at 11:47

      you had an excellent choice of quotes, all of your slides were well explained and, you had good wording

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  16. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:35

    Brett Armstrong https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=7517EF3E4ADC0ADE!106&authkey=!ACpUVYK5zQXgCNo&ithint=file%2cpptx

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    1. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:41

      lots of quotes but no quotations Good job

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:41

      Great layout, opinions, and comments.

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:50

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:51

      no quotations other than that perfect!

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    5. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:06

      Lots of great quotes a couple of grammar errors though.

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    6. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:12

      Perfect other than that no quotations

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  17. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:37

    Presleyhttps://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=479DE903DD3F9E7!1890&authkey=!AKZtijQAMqNGhYg&ithint=file%2cpptx

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:45

      this wasn't even a question? You skipped two parts of the question.
      good opinions though anyways

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:04

      liked your layout!!!!!! ideas and wording can be smoothed out a lil

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:04

      without the books is like a C+ but with the books jumps up to an A good job buddy

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    4. raija14 October 2014 at 12:13

      great explanations. it was visually appealing, good job

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  18. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:40

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    1. manuel14 October 2014 at 11:44

      you explanied your self well but could use more quotes

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:49

      needs longer input

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 11:53

      Firstly, the font is too neon and it distracts the reader from the actual message of the theme, but you were straight forward and thought out.

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:00

      You had good quotes but you could have added more.

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  19. raija14 October 2014 at 11:52

    RAIJA
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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:13

      Great layout, don't forget to capitalize

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    2. Unknown14 October 2014 at 12:13

      watch capitalization but well done

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  20. Unknown14 October 2014 at 17:50

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 17:51

      sorry for all the flaws to my last presentation i polished mine so enjoy reading this one

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  21. Unknown29 October 2014 at 12:15

    https://www.dropbox.com/home/Davis

    Nevan's powerpoint

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  22. Lukas31 October 2014 at 12:09

    Lukas
    http://www.powtoon.com/show/cKBnSlSCgwF/blank/#/

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  23. Unknown7 November 2014 at 11:25

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  24. Unknown9 November 2014 at 18:00

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